DESIGN FOR PRINT AND WEB
CRIT
These are the developments I showed during my crit, I wanted to get feed back on the general design and whether they were in keeping with my concept.
Logo
Loyalty card
Order form
Verbal feedback:
- Doesn't communicate theme of type enough
- good logo
- good use of colour and ideas behind colour choice
- stock consideration?
- Needs more structure, order form looks like list
I agree with the first comment to act on this i am going to try and incorporate more typography and base it on that more. I also agree that it looks unstructured to rectify this i plan to install some sort of grid to make it more structured
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