Tuesday, 7 January 2014

OUGD504 Design for print and web: Crit

OUGD504
DESIGN FOR PRINT AND WEB
CRIT



These are the developments I showed during my crit, I wanted to get feed back on the general design and whether they were in keeping with my concept.


Logo


Loyalty card



Order form




Verbal feedback:

  • Doesn't communicate theme of type enough
  • good logo
  • good use of colour and ideas behind colour choice
  • stock consideration?
  • Needs more structure, order form looks like list

I agree with the first comment to act on this i am going to try and incorporate more typography and base it on that more. I also agree that it looks unstructured to rectify this i plan to install some sort of grid to make it more structured


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